Vow of the Shadow King by Sylvia MercedesMy rating: 2 of 5 stars
⭐⭐ 2 Stars
๐ถ️ 1 Spice
Well.... I am sort of unsure where to begin. The book starts where book one left off, and honestly, I was super hopeful. I enjoyed the first book, but book 2 missed the mark for some pretty large reasons. Did I hate the book outright? No. It was OK at points, and there were places that I liked. I read it in a few hours, which is always a good thing, but I could not overlook some of the bigger problems, and let me start with my main one.
There is a lot of back and forth and dragginess at times, not only between characters and the leads, but it also bleeds into the story as well. I found myself on repeat. An event happened in book one, and it happened again in book 2 with little difference, but the event left a bitter taste in my mouth. Our leads' reactions after it honestly felt totally underplayed. Like, if I had been in her shoes, I would have gone crazy, but she had little reaction, which felt wrong and left the whole thing feeling, well... not good.
Then there is something else that happened two times in the same book, and it felt like those quests in World of Warcraft where you get your quest, go do the thing, and come back, but rather than getting a different quest, you end up with the same quest again. It left me totally underwhelmed, and some of the biggest events in the book just did not feel as important or grand, or fill me with fear, because it was lacklustre.
The leads had ZERO growth. In fact, I felt like some lost brain cells and regressed to ignoring logical and rational thinking. Our King had to be one of the worst for this. I wanted to yeet my book out the window and scream, but I held out for him to wake up. Instead, I was stuck on a merry-go-round, and that was not solely on him but other characters as well.
The book gives you information, but it's not really what you need. The stuff you need is guesswork and in the wind, and I was fast approaching putting the book down and not carrying on. Sadly, I hate DNFing a book, so I held out.
The fact is, the book has a great idea for the story. The direction and picture are clear, but it was sorely and poorly done at times. There were points I did really like, but overall, it was hard to see that when you were being drowned by problems.
I don't even want to get started on our FMC. Really, I might well be here for days and pull my own hair out.
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